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작성자 : Simpson|등록일 : 2018-11-22 22:22:51|조회수 : 45|댓글 : 0

Simpson 님은 현재 [화상영어 - EXPERT 3] 를 수강중이십니다.

My father bought me a pen.

The pen has 3 colors that red, blue and black.

I like this pen that's why grip is very soft.

I like this one that is give a one more black pen!

I want use this pen long!


Teacher's Comment

My father bought me a pen.

The pen has 3 colors that red, blue and black.

I like this pen that's why grip is very soft.

I like this one that is give a one more black pen!

I want use this pen long!

 

My father bought me a pen.

The pen has 3 colors; red, blue and black.

I like this pen because the grip is very soft.

I like this one because I have another black pen. 

I want use this pen for long time!

 

Hi Simpson :)

Thank you for writing here in your English diary.

You were able to improve a lot when it comes to your writing skills.

Please continue more progress by applying the corrections that I put on your entry.

Take care!

 

Teacher Tin ♥♥♥


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