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 Today I went to library with my friends to do December event when I finished the class. This event is to draw and complimenting the friends or teacher or family etc. We need to draw one picture the book cover. When we finished to draw and painted, we need to write compliment to someone. I will complimented our teacher and our students. First, I drawed charactar at the comic book. I think it was very pretty! And then, I wrote a compliment. And.. finished! It was very very pretty!

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Today I went to library with my friends to do December event when I finished the class. This event is to draw and complimenting the friends or teacher or family etc. We need to draw one picture the book cover. When we finished to draw and painted, we need to write compliment to someone. I will complimented our teacher and our students. First, I drawed charactar at the comic book. I think it was very pretty! And then, I wrote a compliment. And.. finished! It was very very pretty!

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Today I went to library with my friends to attend the December event after we finished the class. This event is to draw and complimenting friends, teacher or family etc. We need to draw one picture on the book cover. When we finished drawing and painting, we need to write a compliment for someone. I complimented our teacher and students. First,I drew a character at the comic book. I think it was very pretty! Then after that, I wrote a compliment. And.. finished! It was really pretty!

 

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