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A night of music
작성자 : justin|등록일 : 2018-12-02 20:06:57|조회수 : 44|댓글 : 0

justin 님은 현재 [화상영어 - EXPERT 1] 를 수강중이십니다.

Today my school, have a competition.

The competition name is night of music,

It is which a play a instrument in school,

at 5'o clock to 7clock.

I go there and cheer to my friend.

Itis a very good day.

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Today my school, have a competition.

The competition name is night of music,

It is which a play a instrument in school,

at 5'o clock to 7clock.

I go there and cheer to my friend.

Itis a very good day.

 

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Today my school, have a competition.

Today, there is a competition in my school.

The competition name is night of music,

It is which a play a instrument in school,

at 5'o clock to 7clock.

It is about playing an instrument from 5 o'clock to 7 o'clock.

I go there and cheer to my friend.

I went there and cheered my friend.

Itis a very good day.

It was a very good day.

 

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Thank you for sharing that here in your diary. Wow! You are a supportive friend. I guess your friend felt a little bit nervous that time. Since you are there, your friend enjoyed performing in the event. Hoping that you can perform with your friend too next time. Fighting, Justin!

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